I guess god heard me say
That one night I hit rock bottom&&heard me pray
I pray he’d lift me up and pull me through
Give me some options and show me what I could do
I left from this world felt so naked so bare
I make my own choices oh I am aware
I got many words not meant to offend
I also got emotions that hold me tight till the end
Better start early so im not late
Be more patient in life and wait
Felt myself face smash my face on concrete
Wishing life would be easy I would succeed end it complete
People blame it on over due stress
Walk away before I become entangled runaway a mess
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Jess, I always love your writing. Your style is so unique to this class, I can feel the rhythm as I read your words. This one is beautiful, sad, empowering, and beautiful. Never stop writing, it could lead to something big, because you have real talent.
I love this Jess, excellent job.
The words rhyme which is awesome and the way you write and always are editing it while writing is amazing.